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She would make the Heavy from TF2 quite jealous though and by the way the idea of just the bikini for the suit, its simple and pleases the eye, well done. Cheers irving-zero and please keep up the nicely looking artwork.
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Awesome work, sure looks like you've got rust down!!!
The style of this piece reminds me a lot of =scruffyronin and a little like =bokuman, all of you - superb artists!
The problem with your coloring is that it's insanely flat, and that you only highlight to white. You also only use one color for skin.
The reason it's insanely flat is because you avoid darks like the plague. When you color digitally, you act as if they should look like watercolors. And even good watercolors can get darker.
That and, when you are coloring, it's fairly monotone. The only reason it's not on the gun is because you had rust, but the overall feel is blue. On the skin, you just have a really yellow orange color, highlighting to blue-white. It looks, seriously, like it's plastic. Lit up in some Toys'r'us display. I want it to have some life. Use some reds, and violet and highlight to something warm like yellow. She should look hot. Like I want to cuddle up to her. Not cold and lifeless.
Anatomically, her legs are way too big, and her head is too small. You also forgot to put a shadow of the gun across her legs. They don't interact at all.
Since I sometimes ramble on, here's a paintover showing some of what I said.
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